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Tim and Joan Go Travelling by brianskywalker Tim and Joan Go Travelling by brianskywalker
Another set of illustrations for a learn-to-read curriculum. See samples of it here: [link] - just click on "Catalog of lessons" and then find various "Simple Stories with Jacqueline Smith" in the drop down menus.
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Artie-Smarty Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
very cute illustration :)
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MartinSilvertant Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Professional General Artist
I like the illustrations a lot more than the story, though I find the part where Tim "will shout" to Joan particularly amusing, as "will" to me suggests it's common courtesy to shout because it's protocol. And then to think of Tim's big, bulgy head shouting as its tiny body resists the weight of his cranium.

In all seriousness though, I find the characters to be hilarious and the backgrounds quite wacky and playful so I'm sure it will attract to children well. I just wish the story was better written.
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brianskywalker Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I have no control over the story itself. Or the dimensions, or number of frames. The three panels is extremely limiting.
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