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Alpine 23 March 2012 by brianskywalker Alpine 23 March 2012 by brianskywalker
Just dabbling a bit with a font. I think the overall color needs work, and the 's'. Anyway, if anyone has thoughts, you're welcome to tear apart the design so far! :)
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MartinSilvertant Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
Fantastic that you worked on Alpine again! The color contrast is a bit too low to judge the details comfortably, but here goes:

I think you have something fantastic going on here, however it's not very stable yet. I think you can easily remove a few of those bumps and it would still have that original appearance. The bottom of a, d and e looks sloppy.

I love the 's' but the bottom might be a bit too heavy. 'v' could be a bit wider. Very cool looking 't'.
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brianskywalker Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D

Thank you. Actually, to an extent I want it to be bumpy, because I am going for a little bit of an organic/drawn feeling.

I'm uploading another version now.
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